37.2 General tips
A series of experimental studies concludes that
… a majority of undergraduates admit to deliberately increasing the complexity of their vocabulary so as to give the impression of intelligence.
— Oppenheimer (2006), p. 139
That is, study like to use fancy words to sounds clever. One conclusion of the study was that using ‘fancy’ language does not work: ‘needless complexity leads to negative evaluations…’ (Oppenheimer (2006), p. 151). One recommendation by the author is to
… write clearly and simply if you can, and you’ll be more likely to be thought of as intelligent.
— Oppenheimer (2006), p. 153
With this in mind, a scientific paper:
- Should use simple, clear but technically correct language.
- Should present the facts in an unbiased manner.
- Should be clear, concise and complete.
- Should use facts to make statements.
- Should be complete enough that other professionals can repeat the study.
Likewise, a scientific paper:
- Should not be haphazard, jumbled or illogical.
- Should not be used as a personal soapbox.
- Should not reach conclusions not based on the reported evidence.
- Should not be for insiders only.
- Should not overstate what has been learnt from the study.
References
Oppenheimer DM. Consequences of erudite vernacular utilized irrespective of necessity: Problems with using long words needlessly. Applied Cognitive Psychology: The Official Journal of the Society for Applied Research in Memory and Cognition. 2006;20(2):139–56.